Your Problem Description Sounds Professional. Your Customer Cannot Picture It.

Read your problem description out loud. If it leans on words like inefficiency, friction, visibility, engagement, or pain point, there is a good chance the person hearing it cannot picture what you are talking about.

You can. That is the trap. When you read "inefficiency in their workflow," your mind fills in the exact scene, the Friday afternoon, the spreadsheet, the person you watched struggle with it. The word triggers a picture you already hold. The reader holds no such picture. They get the word and nothing behind it. So they nod, say "interesting," and move on, and you walk away thinking the description landed.

Abstract language has legitimate uses. Describing a problem to a customer is rarely one of them. The abstract version lets a founder name a problem without ever picturing it, which is why it survives. It sounds like clarity. Underneath, there is often nothing specific at all.

TL;DR: If a Stranger Cannot Picture It, Your Description Is Still Abstract.

Words come in two kinds. Observable words name something a person does, says, sees, or experiences. Interpretive words name a category or a judgment. "Spends four hours every Friday fixing a spreadsheet by hand" is observable. "Workflow inefficiency" is interpretive. Customers recognize the first and skim past the second.

The work is to find the interpretive words in your description and replace each one with what you would actually see:

• Spot the abstractions doing concealment work (inefficiency, friction, visibility, engagement, alignment, pain point)

• Ask of each word: what would I see if I watched this happen?

• Replace it with the specific person, action, moment, and cost

• Rewrite, then cut to the half that does the work

• Test it by reading it to a stranger and asking what they pictured

Four signals your description is still abstract:

• A stranger nods politely but cannot picture a specific person doing a specific thing

• It leans on words like inefficiency, friction, visibility, engagement, alignment, or pain point

• You could not, off the top of your head, say what you would literally see if you watched the problem happen

• Your designer, your sales rep, and your cofounder each fill in the blanks differently

If any of those describe you, this article shows you how to find the abstractions, replace them with observable behavior, and end up with a sentence your customer recognizes as their own.

If You Found This Article by Searching for Something Else

Most founders who need this are not searching for "concrete language." They are searching for something more immediate.

• How to write a problem statement.

• How to describe my startup clearly.

• Why doesn't my copy convert.

• How to write a value proposition.

• Problem statement examples.

All of those point at the same underlying question. Can a stranger read your description and picture the exact thing that is broken, or do they only get words that sound right? This article shows you how to close that gap.

Clear to You Is Not Clear to Them

The reason abstract descriptions persist is that they work perfectly for the one person who cannot afford to be fooled by them: you.

You have seen the problem. You have a customer in mind, a moment you watched, a cost you can feel. When you write "teams lack visibility into project status," all of that loads automatically behind the words. You are not reading the sentence. You are reading your memory, and the sentence is just the trigger. Everyone else gets the trigger with no memory attached. They have nothing to load.

This is why the description survives every internal review and still fails in the market. Your cofounder fills in their own version. Your designer fills in a different one. Your sales rep reads it, cannot find a real person inside it, and quietly reverts to describing the product instead. Each of them nods, because the words are reasonable, and each of them pictures something slightly different, which means the description is not actually transferring anything. It is a placeholder that feels like a statement.

The test is brutal and fast. Read your sentence aloud to a stranger and ask them to describe the specific person and the specific thing that is going wrong. If they can only say "sounds like a productivity thing, I guess," the words carried nothing.

There is one question underneath that test, and the rest of this article turns on it. For any word in your description, ask: what would I see if I watched this happen? Hold onto that. Everything below is how to use it.

Observable Beats Interpretive

There are two kinds of words in a problem description, and for the job of making a customer recognize themselves, one of them does most of the work.

An observable word names something you could watch happen. A person does it, says it, sees it, or lives it. "Messages four people and waits a day for an answer." You could film that. An interpretive word names a category or a judgment about what is happening. "Lack of visibility." You cannot film a lack of visibility. It is a conclusion, not a scene, and conclusions are exactly the thing your customer has to be able to reach on their own for the description to land.

Interpretive words travel in recognizable families. Once you can see the families, you can catch them in your own writing.

There are process abstractions: inefficiency, friction, suboptimal, streamline, optimization, workflow. There are state abstractions: underserved, fragmented, disconnected, misaligned, lacking visibility. There are effect abstractions: pain point, frustration, struggle, challenge, issue. There are relationship abstractions: engagement, alignment, collaboration, communication breakdown. And there are improvement abstractions, the comparatives that imply a problem without naming it: better, easier, faster, smoother, simpler.

Each of those words can be a lid on a box, telling the reader a box exists without showing what is inside. Abstractions are not the enemy. Customers say trust, reliability, and control all the time and mean something real by them. The problem is an abstraction with nothing observable underneath, where the word does all the talking and no scene backs it up.

The One Question That Exposes an Empty Abstraction

So take that question to each interpretive word in your description: what would I see if I watched this happen?

If you can answer immediately, with a person and an action and a moment, the abstraction was just shorthand and you can swap in the real thing. If you cannot answer, you have found something more serious than a wording problem. You do not yet understand the problem at the level of behavior. That is the single most valuable finding this exercise can produce, and it is worth more than a polished sentence, because it tells you to go watch a customer before you write another word.

This is why the rewrite is not cosmetic. Concrete language is not the description dressed up. It is the description finally forced to prove it is built on something you actually saw.

Replace the Abstraction With What You Would See

The move is mechanical once you trust it. For every abstract term, write the observable version: the specific person, the specific action, the specific moment, the specific cost.

Here is the pattern in action.

"Inefficiency in their workflow" becomes "spends four hours every Friday reconciling a spreadsheet by hand."

"Friction in the handoff" becomes "copies the same data into three tools twice a week and catches the errors only after a customer complains."

"Lack of visibility" becomes "cannot tell which of her twelve projects is on track without messaging four people and waiting until the next day."

"Engagement issues" becomes "logs in once, never comes back, and unsubscribes from the email two weeks later."

Notice what happens. The abstract versions are interchangeable. "Inefficiency in their workflow" could describe almost any company on earth. The observable versions could only be one specific person on one specific Friday. That specificity is not a loss of generality. It is the whole point. A customer who lives that exact Friday reads the observable version and thinks, that is me. No one has ever thought "that is me" about workflow inefficiency.

Rewrite, Then Cut

Write the new version using only the observable language. It will probably come out longer than the original, and that is fine for now. Get it sharp first and short second. Sharpness is the hard part. Brevity is editing.

Then run the rewrite through two checks.

Could you read this to someone in your target market and have them recognize their own experience? Not nod. Recognize. The reaction you are listening for is the small jolt of someone hearing their own Tuesday described back to them by a stranger.

And if you cut the sentence in half, which half does the work? Most rewrites have one clause that earns its place and one that is filler trailing behind it. Keep the clause that names the person and the cost. Cut the rest. A concrete sentence with one strong half beats a complete sentence with two soft ones.

It Is a Discipline, Not a Fix

The abstractions do not leave. They come back when you are tired, when you are writing fast, and most of all when you are pitching to investors who speak in categories and you want to sound like you belong in the room. The pull toward sounding professional is strongest exactly when the stakes are highest, which is exactly when concealment costs the most.

So the standard is not whether you can write one concrete sentence today. It is whether the concrete version is the one that shows up in your deck, on your website, and in your sales rep's mouth next month, after the polished abstractions have had every chance to creep back in. Marketing runs on language. Sales runs on language. If the language conceals, everything built on it underperforms and no one can say why.

The One Sentence That Tells You Where You Stand

A founder who has done this work can say two things plainly: here is the observable version of my problem, and here is the abstraction I kept reaching for and have now replaced.

A founder who has not done it will defend the abstract version as the "clear" one, because it is clear, to them. That defense is the diagnosis. The description was never doing the work of transferring a picture. It was triggering a picture you already had.

If a stranger can hear your sentence and describe the specific person and the specific thing going wrong, your description is concrete enough to build copy, briefs, and sales conversations on. If they cannot, you have found either a wording problem to fix or a knowledge gap to go close. Either outcome moves you forward.

Concrete language is one of a few moves that make a problem description usable. Stripping out your product's vocabulary is another. Capturing the customer's exact words is a third. They reinforce each other, and they all serve the same end: a description the customer recognizes without translation.

Concrete Language and Your Problem Clarity

In the Startup Readiness Framework, Problem Clarity evaluates whether a founder can describe the problem in language a customer would recognize, not language that merely sounds professional. A problem description that needs concrete language is one of the most common flags in early assessments, because abstract wording is the default register of pitches, decks, and the whole vocabulary founders absorb from the rooms they pitch in.

A founder who can describe the problem in abstract terms has demonstrated fluency. A founder who can describe what they would actually see when the problem happens has demonstrated understanding.

If your Problem Clarity flagged a need for concrete language, start here. Write your one sentence. Mark the interpretive words. Ask what you would see for each one, and replace it. Then read the rewrite to a stranger and find out whether they can picture it.

Problem Clarity is one of the six pillars in the Startup Readiness Framework. If your description is concrete, the next question is whether the rest of your startup is as ready as your problem.

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Published

By Dr. Shaun P. Digan

Original Publication Date: June 11, 2026

Last Updated: June 11, 2026

About the Author

Dr. Shaun P. Digan is the founder of Startup.Ready and the creator of the Startup Readiness Framework, a research-based system for evaluating and validating early-stage startups before launch and early growth. He holds a PhD in Entrepreneurship from the University of Louisville and has spent over 15 years teaching, advising, and consulting with founders on startup strategy, validation, and growth.

In his writing, including The Foundations of Innovation, he focuses on how founders can make better decisions by improving clarity, alignment, and readiness before scaling.